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Citadel by Sketch-BGI Citadel by Sketch-BGI
Ill just leave this here.

I'll do my best to answer any questions :D





Thanks to :iconengorn: for the only canon downloadable citadel symbol on the internet.
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Critique by Borkless Aug 3, 2012, 9:53:25 AM
Very nice, I love the style you've used here, looks almost like an animated series.

Now, going along the lineup:
I like the salarian, he looks very, well scientific. He seems to be missing the bulging chest strap thingies most salarians have, but that might just be his style. Finally, he just doesn't feel original to me, more like a younger version of Mordin.

I love what you did with the quarian, her suit design is very nice. Better looking than Tali's ME1 garb, or the generic quarian outfit, but still definitely not tali. You got her knees right too! Almost no quarian fanart gets the knees right.
However, the mask visor looks too large and convex. Could be because it's stylized, but it feels off to me.

Nice fem!turian. (she IS a she, right?) She looks feminine, without loosing the predatory, horrible-spiny-monster appeal of Garrus. If anything, I'd say she looks more predatory. Not so sure about her color scheme though, seems turians prefer either C-sec blue, or some red-and-black or brown combination.

The drell seems like the generic everyman. Not the smartest of the bunch, but good at heart. (At least that's what I get from his face). I like how his outfit is rather simple, but still detailed enough to fit into ME cannon.
That said, boots and the leggings between his shorts and the aforementioned boots could use some work, they just look a little bland.

The Asari looks, like, she's from, like, the valley. Her face gives her a, like, airheaded, like, image. (now I'll stop that) You posed her well, and I like her boots. Her whole outfit seems very athletic. Tennis players come to mind.
However, her top seems very skimpy, and I doubt a little strap like that would do much in the way of support or reducing bounce-age. (though that may be your goal)

I have to say the krogan is my favorite of the bunch. Sleeveless krogan are always win, and yours is no exception. His face is great as well, cartoony enough to fit with the style, but still mean and blunt enough to be krogan. His pose as well is really fitting.
The only negative thing I can think to say is the red ring around his right arm seems to overlap the opening for his head. (right at the very top). It's pretty pedantic, but it kinda annoyed me.

Finally, the Vorcha. It's funny that cartoonized like this, even he looks (very slightly) cute. His face specially looks d'aww worthy.
The texture on his skill doesn't look very vorcha-ish, and I recall vorcha as having much longer, pointier teeth.

Anyway, good work, hope to see more!
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SnowyZo3 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Coming this fall to CTV, what happens when a drell moves into his Asari girlfriend's house on the Presidium...With all her other roommates???

CITADEL: the sitcom guaranteed to make even a hanar laugh!
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Realdeadmeat Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
if this becomes a new comic series I will totally read it
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Taleeze Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
just adorably great:D loving it!
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artyom2013 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
I forgot (since i've been playing Fallout 3 for about a week) that Mass Effect also had a place called "The Citadel", versus the BoS' Stronghold, that was made from the husk of the Pentagon
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Sithking-Zero Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Why am I seeing this being a sitcom in the style of "Friends"?
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MetalSpiral Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
They look like they could be a sitcom cast.
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bbb35 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
I Love this!!! :love:
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RogueKnight24 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Awesome!! :D
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RDSZeta Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Very nice. I think I remember the turian girl from the AtB Xtra #2
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Eliphas-Chaos Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
i really like this pic, thee characters look like they are teenagers in my oppinuion
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