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Citadel by Sketch-BGI Citadel by Sketch-BGI
Ill just leave this here.

I'll do my best to answer any questions :D





Thanks to :iconengorn: for the only canon downloadable citadel symbol on the internet.
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Critique by Borkless Aug 3, 2012, 9:53:25 AM
Very nice, I love the style you've used here, looks almost like an animated series.

Now, going along the lineup:
I like the salarian, he looks very, well scientific. He seems to be missing the bulging chest strap thingies most salarians have, but that might just be his style. Finally, he just doesn't feel original to me, more like a younger version of Mordin.

I love what you did with the quarian, her suit design is very nice. Better looking than Tali's ME1 garb, or the generic quarian outfit, but still definitely not tali. You got her knees right too! Almost no quarian fanart gets the knees right.
However, the mask visor looks too large and convex. Could be because it's stylized, but it feels off to me.

Nice fem!turian. (she IS a she, right?) She looks feminine, without loosing the predatory, horrible-spiny-monster appeal of Garrus. If anything, I'd say she looks more predatory. Not so sure about her color scheme though, seems turians prefer either C-sec blue, or some red-and-black or brown combination.

The drell seems like the generic everyman. Not the smartest of the bunch, but good at heart. (At least that's what I get from his face). I like how his outfit is rather simple, but still detailed enough to fit into ME cannon.
That said, boots and the leggings between his shorts and the aforementioned boots could use some work, they just look a little bland.

The Asari looks, like, she's from, like, the valley. Her face gives her a, like, airheaded, like, image. (now I'll stop that) You posed her well, and I like her boots. Her whole outfit seems very athletic. Tennis players come to mind.
However, her top seems very skimpy, and I doubt a little strap like that would do much in the way of support or reducing bounce-age. (though that may be your goal)

I have to say the krogan is my favorite of the bunch. Sleeveless krogan are always win, and yours is no exception. His face is great as well, cartoony enough to fit with the style, but still mean and blunt enough to be krogan. His pose as well is really fitting.
The only negative thing I can think to say is the red ring around his right arm seems to overlap the opening for his head. (right at the very top). It's pretty pedantic, but it kinda annoyed me.

Finally, the Vorcha. It's funny that cartoonized like this, even he looks (very slightly) cute. His face specially looks d'aww worthy.
The texture on his skill doesn't look very vorcha-ish, and I recall vorcha as having much longer, pointier teeth.

Anyway, good work, hope to see more!
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A2theC2theG Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
The expressions on the faces you draw make me chuckle. The Vorcha's in particular. I need no context to enjoy this. Good day.
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SnowyZo3 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Coming this fall to CTV, what happens when a drell moves into his Asari girlfriend's house on the Presidium...With all her other roommates???

CITADEL: the sitcom guaranteed to make even a hanar laugh!
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A2theC2theG Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
But not an Elkor?
Not worth my time.
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Realdeadmeat Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
if this becomes a new comic series I will totally read it
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Taleeze Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
just adorably great:D loving it!
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artyom2013 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
I forgot (since i've been playing Fallout 3 for about a week) that Mass Effect also had a place called "The Citadel", versus the BoS' Stronghold, that was made from the husk of the Pentagon
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Sithking-Zero Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Why am I seeing this being a sitcom in the style of "Friends"?
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:iconmetalspiral:
MetalSpiral Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
They look like they could be a sitcom cast.
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bbb35 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
I Love this!!! :love:
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RogueKnight24 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Awesome!! :D
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:iconrdszeta:
RDSZeta Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Very nice. I think I remember the turian girl from the AtB Xtra #2
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Eliphas-Chaos Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
i really like this pic, thee characters look like they are teenagers in my oppinuion
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famguy777 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
I don't mean to be rude, but where is it. It's been two weeks and not a single after the black or citadel. You need to live up to your promise, or atleast explain why they are not out yet.
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Sketch-BGI Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
I appreciate your anticipation but I never promised WHEN I was going to put them up. I don't owe anyone anything. I barely even check my DA every two weeks :P
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:iconfamguy777:
famguy777 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
WHAT?!?! I check mine very day!
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Ezri-Krios Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
They are all so cute! The krogan is my fave, just for the comedy factor, but they are all wounderful. Thanks!
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DinoJake Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Your personal multiplayer lineup, I presume?
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:iconanonrahem:
anonrahem Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
I greatly enjoy this story. Tali as a main-ish character. This story is just a lot of fun.
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xX-Tabataba-Xx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your cartoon style for the mass effect aliens, its so unique and it's just it's own thing! :D GREAT JOB!
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verge-1 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student
do i sense a new webcomic series alonf with ur other one hmmmm :3
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thearbiterthel12 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
i like the krogan
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TychoShiel Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Can't wait!
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caporaletravers Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Now you must answer at this "Who are they?!?!?"
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theEyZmaster Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
aww!
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Nethalf Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Ditzy asari is so ditzy.
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moreeman06 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm excited for this one i still hope you'll finish after the black but i can't wait for this one either
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oshgeth117 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
i was wondering if your going with the destroy ending like after the black? and if so are you gona do the same thing with edi being repaired so the geth come back?
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poppy201 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
Love the work. Each of them looks a warm and wonderful character. Just one question. Will there be any Human characters in the story? as I think they may help balance out the cultural difference/
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Jetxor Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I really love how you drew the Krogan!
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spruce56 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
This looks great. The asari looks very girlish, like she's meant to be quite young?
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BaneGrievver Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
So I didn't want to blather on with a full critique, but I wanted to just say a few things!

First - I love it! I think the idea is great, the design and quality is great! Fantastic!

The Drell and Quarian look a bit too generic to me. If you had someone seeing this who was only vaguely familiar with the Mass Effect universe, they might think it was Tali or Thane or cause some confusion.

Can't wait to see where you go with this!
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Adeviantman Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG CANT WAIT :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Coobalt-Dahonli-One Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
*mindblown*

I really need to find myself a Multiplayer group...
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PrincessFelia Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
Wow! awesome ART!!
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Ithildiel Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So great art, I am loving the personalities there, hehe!And of course your style is AWESOME!;)

PS: And of course, the Vorcha had to go and piss off a Krogan, didn't he?*rolls eyes*:p
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QueenyProductions Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Writer
Is the quarian staring at the salarian's ass?

If she is, I totally understand
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:iconveylia:
Veylia Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Professional Writer
I love the vorchas face xD
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Volhica-Assassin Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Artist
will be interesting to read the story about these guys))
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Reaper81609 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
always leave it to the vorcha to piss someone off
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PuppeteerM Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. But why is your Salarian green?
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:iconswinns:
Swinns Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Looks amazing!

Btw I really want to see a male quarian in your art style
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Cylor Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the personalities on display here.
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yoyonah Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ok.... If this is a new webcomic, I am definitely going to read it. The drawing style alone is awesome.
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oshgeth117 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
this is the first comic i've ever seen a vorcha in and you nailed the look of it great job
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:iconfamguy777:
famguy777 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
The quarian looks like your other quarian design, Aati Vahna( I think thats what she was called.) So just make that her.
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TheWonderingSword Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012   Writer
Happy Asari is HAPPY! :D
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Lorcan0c Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Terrific work! :D The attention-to-detail here is incredible!
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Sketch-BGI Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Thank you!
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:iconlorcan0c:
Lorcan0c Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome :)
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NamelessManic Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Oc's eh? Looks like a nice group, are they all yours?
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